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Thursday, July 27, 2006

when you were mine...


there was this time...
when you were mine...
i had you...
and the world was mine...
loved u a lot...
had no doubt in my mind...
that was the time when you were mine...


there was this time...
when you were mine...
when the flowers bloomed...
and the sun used to shine...
but the love you gave...
was it ever mine???


there was no time...
when you were mine...f
ell, you fell like d leaves from me...
died i died slowly as d autumn tree...
as if the sun which shone...
was never there for me...
pain i got was from you...
peace i made was for you...
guess i've left you somewhere behind...
cos there was this time...
when you were mine...

9 comments:

Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry said...

nice one...waise is everyone here makin a blog jus to post poems n all..do they read other blogs....? even ikshith has come up wid poems..blogs are meant for articles n every other shitt too....!

PrimaDonna said...
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PrimaDonna said...

she is still yours....


ek dur se aati hai
paas aake palat ti hai....
ek rah akeli si, rukti hai na chalti hai...
in reshmi rahon mein
ek rah to vo hogi
tum tak jo pahaunchti hai
is mor se jaati hai....
is mor se jaate hain
kuch sust kadam raste
kuch tez kadam raahein......

m still here... said...

m not talkin bout someone here... its something... hope u understand...

PrimaDonna said...

oh ho......ab mujhe apne brain ko blank karke firse poem padni padegi......i ve a one-track mind....u kno...
chalo koi nahi....i ll try my best...waise nice poem....

PrimaDonna said...

waise......tumhari poem padne ke baad ek letter likha tha tumhare naam....kuch zyada hi sochti hun na......ab padwana nahi padega....

Ridhi said...

Real nice blog...nd so true posts.....


As SHE s said...She s still urs.....I hope SHE stays urs...nd the 2 of u stay as bful as ever.....

Good luck!

Ridhi :)

m still here... said...

thnx a lot but this poem was referrin to life.. not love

purva said...

today it sounds very gud..frankly,pehle "bakchodi" lagti thi!!:)sry..but today it sounds so amazing!!