Shayad vo ek mausam hit tha.
ik pal sard aur dooje main barsa hi tha.
jane to us sard hawa main kitna moti dhoonde.
is khauf main tha man ki phir sab kuch bahe jayega.
ik pal main bheega dooje jala,
phir bhi jane kyon vo mujhpe yun hi chala.
jane kyon phir bhi lagta hai ki vo ik mausam hi tha.
jane suraj mujhpe itna raushan kyon tha,
shayad vo bhi us mausam ka ek gune tha.
kaash ke jhonka hawa ka main bhi hota,
to saath uske naam mera bhi hota
main bhi phir shayad uska ik chehra hota .
shayad phir vo samajhta meri khamoshi
aur mujhse bhi kuch kehta hota.
shayad main hi kuch khudgarj tha.
manga jo maine vo uska dard tha.
pyaar diya usne par shayad vo ek karz tha
diya to maine bhi jaise vo mera farz tha.
par shayad vo ek mausam hi tha.
ik pal barsa aur dooje main sard hi tha...
8 comments:
this is my first hindi work so pls bear with it...
hey bhagwan..tumhe hi duniya tumhi ko nahi..hain be? hmmm...now i have read the whole thing and tell ya what..another poet realizes himself and thats so soothing..
'shayad main hi kuch khudgarz tha
maanga jo maine wo uske dard tha'
khoobsoorat !
awesome....i wish i could write the comment in hindi but i dont want to mar your beautiful piece of work. its absolutely bedazzling...
the answer to your poem lies in the poem itself....read the last four lines and you ll find it.....SHAYAD.
m not askin any questions dear... jst wrote these lines like that...
like that???? cant buy that but anyways.....good job.
hmmm now m beginnin to like my work...
its rly gud shailey..ws it ur intention to make it haunting??well,it worked..it stays wth one..
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