face lit with a gracious smile.
and eyes telling a truthful lie..
here she comes sparkling from a mile..
from a mile, she lives n comes alive.
from the fathom..
shes dead n struggles to fight.
with the pain in eyes,
thats so easy and so difficullt to hide.
oh god, i could see the ocean..
as the waves they appear from behind..
as she passes me by..
DEATH oh i saw death once,
in those eyes..
now its d sparkle of a thousand stars minus the sky.
but void still looms n i could see it right.
that d hope is still fightin
fightin that disguise.
d world would pray n pray would she.
for the life she had, and life to be.
the eyes would then jst shine so bright
like a million stars minus the sky...
7 comments:
could ve done it lot btr..
:-(
aise hi chalta raha to seekh jaega ladka ek din..
:-)..
m tryin u kno..
ye tum hamesha ladkiyon par hi poem kyu likhte ho???! kabhi kisi smart,tall, handsome ladke par bhi kuch likh liya karo......he he.. ;-)
but anyways..a million stars along with d sky..thats 4 u...
million stars minus the sky sounded btr.. cos then d darkness cant b seen... lol
honestly..it luks like wot u wud ve writtn like 2 yrs bk..duznt ve da usual zing..i mite b wrong tho..
:)
Don't know y so much self criticism... i think its beautifully written...
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